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YOU SHALL NOT ABANDONS PET

M.K Clinton once said Dog are loyal,patient,fearless,forgiving and capable of pure love virtues that people get in through life without abandoning at least once mean how dog and all pet doesn't want to be abandoned. I think that abandon pet is like abandon your pride

                                                      

there are 2.7 million pet kill a years because of limited animal shelter and only 1 out of 10 dog can find permanent home .people might though that abandon only 1 dog probably not big problem but if everyone think like that there will be over 100 million dog abandon and one day every animal that be abandon probably get kill since there only 50% chance of pet in animal shelter that will get help.

There still hope in helping the animal there are a lot of way to help but

some people start to don’t care about other living thing that shared the planet with them luckily Faye Carey is someone who care about other she start Facebook page to help pet in animal shelter trying to find owner for pet, you might though she probably can help only 1 or 2 dog but she manage to find owner for 60 pets

:some other people who still care about other animal are Ayna Agarwal who is very serious when it comes to helping pet because she create group called STOP globally which is group that stop overpopulation animal which came from pet abandonment because only one dog can create 100 of their dog if they don’t help other people might don’t seem this as big problem but let think if there 300 dog probably half of them are other gender there 150 female normally dog make around 4-5 dog that 750 more dog if there 1000 dog that abandoned  there will be 75000 see the problem?

In conclusion what I want to say is pet abandonment isn’t just little problem only one dog can create 100 dogs and their effect other 7 billion life not just you or dogs life so you must reconsider if you want to abandoned pet because it like lunching nuclear at your own country.

Values Reflection

Values 2nd quarter reflection

My favorite project is the final project because we got to choose our own project.this quarter I learn about water and how it effect life on earth  if I got to compared this this quarter to the first quarter I think the first quarter is a little bit better

Head hand heart

REFLECTION

 Head:I only have one map but I still get it over 220 so yes.
New Head goal:get more than 25 M

 Hand:I eat less pizza but I still eat some junk food  such as hamburger,french fries,burrito(is that junk food) etc so I kind of reach my goal.

heart:I think I reach  my goal because from what I remember I help almost everyone 
New Heart goal: Participate in school activity.

Science 2nd quarter reflection

 Science 2nd Quarter reflection

 My favorite project in this quarter is footprint  project because it always fun when you got to choose your own decision this time I choose gibbon as my footprint but there nearly none people out there care about gibbon feet so it very us for us to find photo of it and it very funny/surprising/gross when my teacher just pick up dead cockroach and put it to plaster hope it will become fossil.Another project I did like is  layer of the earth project even though thing do really mess up but I still fix it up and get P.The whole quarter what about rock which I doesn't really care but after I finish this quarter I still doesn't about rock but I learned a lot about  it like you could separate kind of just from 

scratch it with white tile. 

script

introduction;

Modern thailand compare to ancient egypt

Culture;

Thailand culture mostly came from religion and geography because some Thai people are really respected the religion it become culture how geography affect Thailand economy ? well because Thailand very hot so Thai people invented songkran day for people to be splashing water to each other to become cooler.

ancient egypt believed in many god  and some of the god very similar to thailand like Hapi god of niles,Hapi is very similar to phramaekongkra which water god in Thailand and both of god create similar festival like Akhet and loy krathong day ancient Egypt believed in afterlife so they have mummies.ancient Egypt usually trade minerals,wheat and animal whiles Thailand trade rice and fish

History

thailand have along history but can’t even compare to egypt which civilization for 2700 years and have 31 dynasty egyptian history will be recorded by scribe thailand used to have a lot of fight long time ago.Most of egypt history are drawing and painting.

Economics

Thailand main income came from traveling,rice and fishing.from tourist thailand will face some trouble when there was crime because foreigner will come less.egypt economic will come from trading minerals,animal and crop.egypt might have more steady money than thailand during good pharaohs because they will lead egypt to succeed like hatshepsut who lead egypt to a lot of trade

Geography

thailand have a lot kind  of geography in the north and northeast they will be a lot of mountain and could be cold in winter but in northeast there will be very hot in summer in central flatland and because of that there are a lot of high building in central.In south the will have a lot of mountain and sea there only three season in south.Liver .Egypt is mosly desert but there are niles river that gave ancient egypt fertiles land like thailand there are 2 major river in thailand mekong river and jaophraya river both influence thai people ina lot of way but mekong are way longer than chaophraya river and mekong connected to other country so the can come and trade,Niles river affect culture and economics of egypt since it connected to mediterrenean sea which is inly way there coud come and trade or shared new culture to ancient egypt

Government

Thailand government trying to develop country but they will try to help people when they need like when they flood but they will give supply to victim but they won’t go an investigate little problem like what happen in poor societies or problem the district so I think the government doesn’t do that much to met the need of people so thailand king gotta do it.Ancient Egypt government will collect taxes

but they important job was to help pharaoh so if pharaohs go people will meet the right.

My writing strength and area of improvemnet

“Flash Draft” Essay Writing

Write an essay on teen activism that includes an introductory paragraph, a paragraph for each key point with evidence to support each point, and a closing paragraph. Use POW + TREE to structure your essay and paragraphs.

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my writing is in the bottom

Teen activist change the world.Teen activist is teen who work very hard for other people.they are are normal kid but but they heart are special.teen activist want world to be better.they from different country different culture but one thing that all teen activist is the same is they want to help other people

Some teen activist not scared of dead.Iqbal he was a debt slave in carpet factory .He was treated like slave when he in carpet factory but when he escaped from the carpet factory in the age of 10  he went to England to make speech, to tell the truth and that make someone very angry after he england he went to america to do the same thing he became famous from speak out for child slavery most people thought the story would end like this but not for Iqbal he went back to where

he come from some student in america ask why he wanted to ga back even know he in danger

Iqbal said “I need to finish what I start” he wasn’t scared of being shot or kill.Sadly Iqbal got shot and died in front of his grandma house

Some teen activist continues the legacy.Craig kielburger is 12 years old when he read story of Iqbal that when he start the campaign Free The Children he work harder than any adult could do he travel to 5 or more country but for child slavery he go to some developing country to investigate what happened.his story became famous when he make speech that got donation over 150000 dollars ha kept working to stop child slavery who would though that 12 year old boy will do thing like this once he said  free the children is more important than playing game

some work for other. Alex lin is 9 years old boy who read newyork time and known world has serious problem what did he do? he create group that helping and fixing electronic waste since we make up of 70 % toxic waste since he start he recycle more than 20000 pond of electronic but still there only 13.6% that been recycle what he do now? he won prize and make you feel bad for throwing your computer.

In conclusion I want to say that even activist do thing for other even though they don’t need to do that like iqbal who got kill because of standing for human right or craig kielburger who travel to developing country to stop child labor when he could relax and playing game.they are isn’t just a role model they are hero and surely will alway remember as teen activist

Organization	Yes - Starting - No
I wrote a beginning that introduces the topic.	Starting
I wrote a clear thesis statement.	Starting - your thesis is the last or second last sentence in your introduction
I wrote three supporting reasons that match my thesis statement.	No
I used transition words - (for example, for instance, however, on the other hand, in contrast to, this shows)	Starting
I wrote an ending that restates the main idea.	Starting
I have paragraphs with topic sentences.	Starting
Development
I used clear evidence such as facts, quotes, stories and specific examples.	Starting
I explained my evidence to show how it matched my main point.	No - You need to explain how the examples that you discussed show that teen activists change the world.
I used specific vocabulary and precise words to develop my topic.	Starting
I used a formal tone and sound like an expert on my topic.	Starting
Language Conventions
I use capitalization, quotation marks, and abbreviations appropriately.	No
I have checked my spelling.	No
I have used a variety of sentences.	Starting
I have used commas correctly.	No
I have used apostrophes in contractions and possessives correctly.	Starting

Net, your essay structure is starting to emerge and it is clear that you have researched a bit about the different activists. Keep up the effort!

MY strength is I use some of sentence that I feel like it very powerful

I can improved on organizing my paragraph and check the grammar and word