- - what is your personal narrative about?
- - why did you choose this topic?
- what is ONE thing you did really well in this piece of writing?
- what are your strengths as a writer?
- what are some areas you would like to improve upon? How?
- It about my family,my life,big thing that happen in my family and my awesome activity
- It have many little seed story but most of it belong to my family
- I think it is strong start and ending
- Leave a strong ending
- More detail
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